After looking at it again, I realized the original font size of the title was a little too big. It was 60pt. I made it 48pt. I think I def need to print this out and look at it to see if there is anything else I need to change. I also added an en dash between the years on the last sentence in the first paragraph. Did anyone know what an en dash was? I had no idea you were supposed to use it in-between dates until a couple of days ago when reading Thinking with Type. I should have read this book years ago.